You’ve poured hours, months — maybe even years — into your manuscript. But deep down, you’re asking yourself:
- Is this book really clear?
- Will readers actually care?
- Am I about to spend thousands polishing something that still won’t work?
I’ve seen too many smart, passionate authors push “publish” too soon, only to regret it when their book fails to connect.
That’s why I created the Nonfiction Manuscript Review. It’s the fastest, clearest way to get professional, big-picture feedback that saves you from wasted time, wasted money, and wasted opportunities.
For $1,000 you’ll receive:
- A 3–5 page written review of your manuscript, showing you what works, what doesn’t, and exactly how to strengthen your book.
- A 30-minute clarity call with me, where we’ll walk through your review and map your next steps.
What This Is NOT:
- This is not proofreading.
- This is not grammar editing.
- This is not for fiction, poetry, or academic dissertations.
Who This Is For:
- Nonfiction writers (memoir, thought leadership, personal growth, wellness, finance, education, health, etc.).
- Authors who want expert-level insight before committing to full-scale editing, publishing, or marketing.
This is strategic, big-picture guidance that ensures your book is aligned with your goals and resonates with your readers.
How It Works:
- You'll get an automated email from me asking you to submit your manuscript draft (up to 250 pages).
- The email will ask you to answer a few questions in reference to your manuscript.
- You'll receive your written review within 30 days of the receipt of manuscript AND the answers to the questions.
- Schedule your 30-minute follow-up call to discuss insights and next steps within 30 days of receiving your written review.
Testimonials:
“Through insightful coaching in her Book Foundations course, author and freelance writer Halona Black helped me evolve from an insecure storyteller to a confident writer of transformative non-fiction. Her remarkable ability to grasp my ideas, combined with her expert guidance in crafting compelling storylines, taught me how to create powerful arcs of change that will resonate with readers. What sets Halona apart is her skill in helping writers like me develop our authentic voices while mastering the art of showing transformation on the page. Thanks to Halona’s coaching and mentorship, I now confidently approach my non-fiction writing, knowing I can create a meaningful impact through my stories.”
- Kathy A. Hampton
I've worked with Halona several times over the past five years, first for copy editing the second novel in my adventure fantasy series, and most recently for substantive editing of a short story. I've also recommended her to several of my clients for their more technical writing needs. She's always responsive and professional; easy to work with. Most recently I came to her to edit a short story that I was submitting to a contest. I had a pretty major rewrite to do in a very short amount of time. She handled it with ease and the story was submitted on time and thoroughly edited! What's more, I enjoy working with Halona because I can tell she cares not just about the work but the person behind it. - Dr. Nicole Cutts